Thursday, April 26, 2012

Rhetorical Knowledge Draft


We learned about rhetorical knowledge in English 112. The rhetorical knowledge includes the appeals triangle and the rhetorical triangle. These triangles each have three parts that we’ve learned are important in writing and also in one’s life.

The rhetoric triangle indicated that an author crafts his or her message with their goals and agenda that will meet the audience’s expectations and needs. In this paper, I am the author. My goal is to write an outstanding evaluation of myself to get an A in English 112. The message that I’m crafting is to prove that I’ve learned something in English 112 and to provide evidence. My audience is my professor, who expects me to provide enough evidence that will prove I’ve learned the outcomes of English 112.

The appeals triangle includes ethos, pathos and logos. Ethos deals with one’s reputation, credibility, trust and identification. An author needs a good ethos to ensure to his or her reader that what the author is saying is true and competent. Logos deals with logic and facts. The effect of logos is it evokes cognitive and rational response. Pathos deals with persuasion by using one’s emotion. In order to communicate successfully, a rhetorician must know who their audience is, the purpose of the message, and which appeals to use.

Rhetorical knowledge is also where we learned to analyze tasks, formats and genres and link claims and evidence to them. We also learned how to research effectively to achieve particular rhetorical purposes. An example of this is the argument analysis we were assigned to write. Here’s a link of my argument analysis. Lastly, we learned to deliver academic texts properly in print, digital, visual, or oral modes.

These are the outcomes of rhetoric knowledge that I’ve learned in English 112. The rhetoric triangle, appeals triangle, and to research effectively and deliver texts in many ways without losing credibility and meet the audience expectations and needs.

Managing Virtues


Research Black Box


Notes on Gaining Other Perspectives


Notes on Critical Reading, Writing, and Thinking



Notes


Notes on Academic Writing, Appeals Triangle, and Rhetoric Triangle


Notes on Conversation Goals and The Art of Conversation


Example of the use of digital technology


This is an example of the use of bubbl.us, which is a website that help you create a bubble map to brainstorm ideas. Here is the link to the website.

Tuesday, April 17, 2012

Digital Technology Draft

We’ve learned about using Digital Technology in English 112. We have used Digital Technology in class by using Google Docs and Blogger. Using Digital Technology became a good way in communicating with each other and being able to get a hold of any previous assignment anywhere you are.

Google Docs is a website we use in class to write notes we take. One can make documents which is just like a word document that you can save online. since its online you can access it anywhere that has Internet. Google Docs also includes presentation which is like PowerPoint. it includes all the features that a normal PowerPoint has. It also has spreadsheet, form, drawing and table. The most we use in class though is documents. We use documents to draft this evaluation. We also revise, review, and edit using Google Docs.

Another Digital technology we use in English 112 is the Blogger. What is good about Blogger and Google Docs is that it is both powered by google, which means one only need to sign up on one to have both. Blogger is where we submit our texts after we revise and edit it in google docs. Blogger is really great because it also help us connect with each other and it includes a comment box. Having a comment box is great because having other people tell you what you’re missing and what they think about what you wrote. It is also an easy way for the professor to check if we did our work and submitted it on time.

We also learned how to distinguish between a bad and a good digital source. People can just post anything online so a researcher must know when to believe a source and when the source is not true. By doing examples in class we established that when doing a research, a blog source is not a good source because it is biased. People posting in blogs usually put in their own opinions rather than the facts. To know if a digital source is reliable, one needs to check out that website look into the author’s credentials, when it was posted and things like that. a researcher also have to make sure that and double check with other reliable source to see if the information are the same.

Google Docs, blogger, and distinguishing between a good digital source from bad ones are the things we learned in English 112. All of this are part of digital technology. at the end of the semester we learn to use electronic environments to draft, revise, review, edit, and submit texts. We learned to use information retrieved online. Lastly, we learned to publish texts in both print and electronic forms.

What I Have Learned in English 112


            I believe that I have learned a great deal during the past couple of months in English 112. We have had interesting discussions on a variety of important topics including oral communication, the appeals triangle, the writing process, critical thinking, how to gain a new perspective, and how to develop a good understanding of text. In addition, we also covered many important people that had a significant influence on the world, and, in particular, on the English language. These people include Benjamin Franklin, Jean Jacques Rousseau, and Kurt Vonnegut.
            When addressing others, I have learned that even the slightest movements and body language can make a big difference. For example, one’s stance is very meaningful. I have learned that I should not have any distractions in front of me like a book or crossed arms because these are signs that I may not be fully engaged in the conversation, and I could be closing myself to the person with whom I am speaking. Also, the way one stands or sits indicates whether the topic or the person is of interest. While talking with another person, it is important to be attentive and completely engaged in the conversation. Interacting in the conversation can be accomplished by repeating what was said and by turning the statement into a question. For example, if a person states, “I’ve been reading The Hunger Games,” one can respond with the question, “You’ve been reading The Hunger Games? I’ve heard about that new movie, but I don’t know anything about it. What’s the storyline?” By asking this type of follow up question the speaker is given an affirmation that the topic is of interest, and the conversation can be continued. The focus of one’s gaze is also important. It should always be on the other person in order to indicate attention and involvement. Being a good listener and giving the other party a chance to speak are fundamental to a meaningful discussion.
            I have also learned about conversation goals which include: 1. Better understanding of: the topic, the people around you, and the world you share, 2. Being honest and open, but also balanced, 3. Enjoying oneself, and 4. Practicing skills. In addition, I learned the rules of the art of conversation consisting of give and take, actively listen to what others are saying, and think about what lessons can be learned, mirroring or paraphrasing what the person said, literal level, and emotional level, and lastly, be calm and confident.
            My oral communication skills were put into action last weekend when my family and I traveled to Arizona for a family reunion. When addressing the elders I made sure that my stance was respectful. I did not cross my arms like I normally do when speaking in an informal setting, and I actively listened to what they were saying. While talking to my cousins, I kept my attention on them so they would know that I was interested in what they were saying. I also tried not to get ahead of the conversation and think about what I was going to say next. Rather, I actually focused and listened to what was being said.
            In class, we also reviewed the writing process. The writing process consists of six parts. First is pre-writing which is the discovery and organization of a paper. Drafting follows. After drafting comes the revision stage. This part is when some information is added or deleted. Next comes proofreading or editing. Next is publishing which is also called delivery. The final stage is reviewing which completes the cycle. We also learned that good writing is writing that helps to meet an agenda with one’s intended audience. This goal brings us to the topic of the rhetoric triangle. The rhetoric triangle recommends that an author craft his or her message with specific goals in mind and an agenda that will meet the audience’s expectations and needs.
            We also covered the appeals triangle which includes ethos, pathos, and logos. Ethos deals with one’s reputation, credibility, trust and identification. An author needs a good ethos to ensure to his or her reader that what the author is saying is true and competent. Logos deals with logic and facts. The effect of logos is that it evokes a cognitive and rational response. Pathos deals with persuasion by using one’s emotions. In order to communicate successfully, a rhetorician must know who his audience is, the purpose of the message, and which types of appeals to use.
I know my audience with this essay is my English professor. The purpose of this essay is to explain what I have learned in English 112 and to prove why I deserve a high mark. This essay is mostly logos driven because I am stating the facts that are discussed in class to prove that I deserve to get an A. Ethos is also important in writing essays, especially research papers. The author needs to state his source to gain credibility from the audience. Pathos is usually used in advertisements to persuade people to buy a product being advertised using an emotional appeal.
           
            What are the beliefs that are involved with gaining a perspective from someone else? 1. One must have a vested interest in gaining the perspective of others, 2. The opinions of others are rational, and 3. Others have some additional knowledge to be shared. We know that people make irrational decisions at times, so it is up to us to decide if they are wrong.
            We also learned that there are two methods to understand text: Analysis and Synthesis. Analysis is the practice of breaking the text into parts or features to understand its meaning. Synthesis is bringing together parts of the text into a whole to understand its meaning.
            How to Write with Style by Kurt Vonnegut. Vonnegut gave us specific steps to write with style. He began by instructing the author to select an subject that was important and had personal meaning. He then told cautioned us not to ramble. Kurt Vonnegut also said to keep it simple and have the guts to cut. He then continued by telling the author to be individual and write what is meant to be stated. Lastly, he reminded the writer to pity the readers.
            By stating all of the ideas that I have learned in class and citing specific examples of how I have applied them in my everyday life I believe that I deserve an A on this assignment.
 

Thursday, April 5, 2012

Limited Research Question


Research Question: “How does ‘ask Peter’ work?
Research Question Refined: “What is the secret behind ‘Peter Answers’?

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Definition:
Direct Quote: “A case in point is a website that’s been growing in popularity among the prankster community called Ask Peter, or Peter Answers. It comes complete with creepy Old English font and a copyright line at the bottom that adds to the intrigue, “Peter Answers 3.5 – Virtual Tarot – Original idea: Wizard 666.”
(5 April, 1 PM)

Direct quote: “The Peter Answers (or peteranswers.com) Computer Prank is a magical virus, pure and simple.”
(5 April, 1:42 PM)

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How to start:
Paraphrase: You must petition Peter with the sentence, “Peter, please answer the following question:” before you ask a question.
(5 April, 1:10 PM)

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How it works:
Direct Quote: “The magic really happens when you bring in a second person who knows Peter’s terrible secret (after reading this article, that will be you!)  The second person needs to type in the petition and question for you, and then you’ll get the answer – which is usually remarkably accurate.”
(5 April, 1:15 PM)

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The secret of the trick:
Direct quote: “in the “Petition” field, just type a “.” and start typing the answer to the question that you’re going to ask in the next field. At the end of the answer, type another “.” and then continue typing the rest of “Peter, please answer the following question:” To the person sitting next to you, it only appears as though you’ve typed that one question”
(5 April, 1:30 PM)

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A closer Look:
Direct Quote: “It appears that when each keyboard key is pressed (the onKeyPress event handler), a function is called that returns a character. What character is really returned? If you look at the function for each field, they appear identical, but they’re not. One is named with a leading letter O, two zeroes and three trailing letter O’s again. The second function is named with a leading letter O, a zero, another letter O and four trailing zeroes.” See picture: http://www.makeuseof.com/tag/peter-work-code-prank/
(5 April, 2 PM)

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What the closer look means:
Direct quote: “It means that instead of one, single function handling the text that gets entered into each field and returning a text value to the field, there are actually four distinct functions handling every individual keypress” (http://www.makeuseof.com/tag/peter-work-code-prank/)
(5 April, 2:12 PM)

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Website:
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Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Notes on Research Paper

Research topic: Procrastination

Research question: How do I stop procrastinating? (2 April, 2012, 11 AM)


Start Here: form a better research question (April 2 11:45 AM)

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Definition
Quote: “In psychology, procrastination refers to the act of replacing high-priority actions with tasks of lower priority, or doing something from which one derives enjoyment, and thus putting off important tasks to a later time”


http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Procrastination

(2 April 2012 11AM)

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why we procrastinate
Quote: “So what are the pretexts you're using to avoid life? Here are the top seven excuses I hear from my clients. Do any of them sound familiar to you?

  1. I'll do it later.
  2. I don't have time to do it now.
  3. It's not important.
  4. I'll eventually get to it. This is a lie we tell ourselves as a procrastinator never gets to it.
  5. I'll do it when my children are older.
  6. I'll do it when I have the energy or when I'm in a better mood.
  7. The number one biggest excuse though is: I'll do it when I'm older and retire.”
(April 2, 11:30 AM)
http://www.psychologytoday.com/blog/the-wise-open-mind/201202/learn-how-stop-procrastinating

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How to stop procrastinating... kind of my hypothesis
Quote: “I listed the things that are making me feel lazy and tried to overcome them. Whenever I feel like stopping from my task, I try to recall all those failed projects I had and how guilty they made me felt.”
(April 2 11:35AM)

http://www.howtoavoidprocrastination.org/

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Sunday, April 1, 2012

Research

Research Topic: Procrastination

Research question: "How do I stop procrastinating?"

Hypothesis: Form a plan that will help me do and finish my work on time.

2 Research plans:
      1. go to the library and look for books about stopping procrastination
      2. ask people that used to procrastinate how they stopped.